અવસર


Poetry in Gujarati

અવસર

અવસર માં જીવવું, એમ ભણ્યા પણ ગણ્યા નહિ.

કેટ કેટલા સબંધો છૂટી ગયા.

અમુક વખતે નહિ બોલવાનું બોલાઈ જવાને કારણે, ને ઘણું જયારે જે કહેવાનું હતું એ ન બોલાયું એ કારણે.
બંને સ્થિતિ માં, બેવ પક્ષે, જો કહેવાનું કેહવાયું હોત, તો અવસર જીવાય ગયો હોત…ને સંબંધો સચવાઈ ગયા હોત!


અવસર



Meaning:

The poem “અવસર” / “Avsar”, meaning opportunity in a moment, reflects on missed opportunities and the consequences of unspoken or unnecessary words in relationships. It emphasises how timely communication could have maintained those connections.

It tries to convey the feelings of vulnerability, disappointment, and a longing to be remembered. Despite efforts to connect, misunderstandings and poor timing lead to lost chances, symbolising the importance of acting in the moment. Relationships needs to be nourished, see another writeup on a similar subject: Compounding Returns and Relationships.

The poem offers a deep reflection on life’s fleeting opportunities and unrealised potential.

Here’s a brief translation of key lines from the poem:

  1. I opened my heart (expressed my feelings), but they showed little interest.
  2. I took a leap for you, and crossed boundaries, remember that I wasn’t hesitant.
  3. I gave my word, and always lived it, but how do I express the pain I received in return?
  4. Everyone ran ahead, and no one stopped by (to check on me), remember me in your thoughts if you can.
  5. The time came, but it was late too, now it’s up to you to reconnect.
  6. If you are short of words then write blank, the eyes are getting closed i.e. the relationships are about to end, at least now break the silence, and it is up to you to choose, to say good about me or not.




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  1. ShashaMin 💜 Avatar

    Hello iam ShashaMin thanks for like my post smile as beautiful like the moon are you from India?

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    1. BHAViN shUkla Avatar

      Hi Shashamin, so good to connect. I was born and brought up in India, but now living in the UK 🇬🇧.

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      Thanks to you for subscribing. I liked your post/poetry on “beautiful like the moon “ because it was good and well written. Keep writing ✍️😇

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      1. ShashaMin 💜 Avatar

        Thanks for replying to my comment. Nice meeting you in here. Let’s keep writing and sharing interesting stories 🌌✨

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          Likewise! Thank you so much for connecting.

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